Autumn story unit · KS1 (Reception to Year 2)
Hedgehog's Lantern Walk
Learning objective: Notice and describe seasonal changes in autumn using adjectives and the senses.
Suggested story settings: Genre: Animal Story · Length: 2 chapters · Time: 10–15 minutes · Story world: Autumn Lantern Wood
Talk questions
- What changes did you notice in the woods? Have you seen any of them near school?
- How did the animals help each other get ready for winter?
Writing task
Draw an autumn leaf or conker. Write one sentence about it using a describing word: 'I can see a ___ leaf.'
Word bank
- autumn
- the season after summer, when leaves change colour and fall and the days get shorter
- conker
- the shiny brown seed of a horse chestnut tree
- crunchy
- making a loud, crisp sound when you step on it or bite it
- hedgehog
- a small animal with prickly spines on its back that sleeps through the winter
- acorn
- the small nut of an oak tree, which sits in a little cup
Success criteria (adventure story)
Reception to Year 2: I can write a beginning, a middle and an end. I can use describing words. I can use capital letters and full stops.
National Curriculum statements
- “expanded noun phrases to describe and specify [for example, the blue butterfly]” (Year 2, Writing – vocabulary, grammar and punctuation (statutory))
- “recognising and joining in with predictable phrases” (Year 1, Reading – comprehension (statutory))
- “sequencing sentences to form short narratives” (Year 1, Writing – composition (statutory))
Sample opening (written for litsee.com, to read aloud)
Crunch, crunch, crunch went the leaves in Autumn Lantern Wood.
Hazel the hedgehog was sleepy. Soon she would curl up for the winter. But first she wanted to find one last shiny conker for her friends.
“I will help you,” said Leo, and he held up his lantern.
Crunch, crunch, crunch. They found a red leaf. They found an acorn in a little cup. They found a squirrel, busy hiding nuts.
“Have you seen a shiny conker?” asked Hazel.
The squirrel pointed up the path with her fluffy tail. “Under the big horse chestnut tree!”
Crunch, crunch, crunch, off they went.
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Autumn story unit · KS2 (Years 3 to 6)
The Last Lantern of Autumn
Learning objective: Use descriptive language and accurate nature facts to bring a seasonal setting to life.
Suggested story settings: Genre: Animal Story · Length: 2 chapters · Time: 10–15 minutes · Story world: Autumn Lantern Wood
Talk questions
- How did the characters plan and work together to solve the problem?
- Which facts about autumn did you learn from the story? Which could you check in a book?
Writing task
Write a short description of an autumn place you know, using all five senses and at least one simile.
Word bank
- hibernate
- to spend the winter in a deep sleep, as hedgehogs and dormice do
- migrate
- to travel a long way at the same time each year, to find food or warmer weather
- deciduous
- describes a tree that loses all its leaves in autumn and grows new ones in spring
- harvest
- the time when crops, fruit and nuts are ripe and are gathered in
- resourceful
- good at finding clever ways to solve problems with whatever you have
Success criteria (adventure story)
Years 3 and 4: I can set the scene in my opening. I can build up to a problem and solve it. I can use paragraphs. I can punctuate speech.
Years 5 and 6: I can hook the reader in my opening. I can build tension towards a turning point. I can use dialogue to move the action on. I can show the setting through the senses.
National Curriculum statements
- “discuss and evaluate how authors use language, including figurative language, considering the impact on the reader” (Years 5 and 6, Reading – comprehension (statutory))
- “in narratives, describing settings, characters and atmosphere and integrating dialogue to convey character and advance the action” (Years 5 and 6, Writing – composition (statutory))
- “retrieve and record information from non-fiction” (Years 3 and 4, Reading – comprehension (statutory))
Sample opening (written for litsee.com, to read aloud)
Every evening in Autumn Lantern Wood, as the light faded early behind the beech trees, the animals lit the lanterns along the path. Every evening except this one.
“It’s the Old Lantern,” said Pip the squirrel, landing on the stile beside Nadia in a scatter of copper leaves. “The one at the top of the hill. It’s gone out, and nobody can relight it.”
Nadia pulled her scarf tighter. The air smelled of damp earth and woodsmoke, and her breath made small clouds.
Old Badger was waiting at the bottom of the hill, leaning on a hazel stick. “The first frost is coming,” he said. “Tonight or tomorrow. Then the hedgehogs will curl up until spring, and the travellers will need that light more than ever.”
Above them, a long line of geese crossed the pink sky, calling to one another as they arrived from the far north for the winter.
“Then we’d better start climbing,” said Nadia.
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